Monday, 4 April 2011

Just like....

Posted by iya_khin at 05:50

Just like an old guitar I’m feelin’ so distorted
Every strum you make went wasted
No melody comes out through me
So out of tune, better for me to smash it.

Just like an old plane taking off at the dark sky
Chasing every storm as if it wanted to crash and die.
Engine stopped at the mid air;
No auto pilot, better for me to jump soon than flare.

Just like a stubborn child making her mama cry
Unstoppable, so silly but oh so cute;
You capture everyone’s attention
Damn, so hard to resist your charm.

Just like you, to think of you makes me insane
What have you done to me I don’t have any clue?
You’re so irresistible, you almost blow my mind
What is there in you? You always leave me with a smile.

Just like………dropped.



19 comments:

Kamila said...[Reply]

oh pag-ibig
hahamakin ang lahat
masunod ka lamang..

hahaha.. tumutuley ang aking ateng mahal..

musingan said...[Reply]

ang bagay na kanta sa tula mo ay....

And just like the ocean under the moon
Well that's the same emotion that I get from you
You got the kind of lovin that can be so smooth
Gimme your heart, make it real
Or else forget about it

Smooth by Santana ft. Rob Thomas.

Yeah....

Akoni said...[Reply]

dedicated ba sa akin to? :D

Xprosaic said...[Reply]

Wow inspired si iya-khin oh! balemtyms ba ngaun? answeet eh! hehehhehehhehe

Sey said...[Reply]
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Sey said...[Reply]

Wish I could do one as poetic as that! It's hard to do so when there is no proper motivation. I specifically love the first Stanza.

Lhuloy said...[Reply]

wajajaja...nakakatawa yung coment ni kua Al...jejeje...i like that song..well it just the ocean under the moon...blah-blah--lalalalala...

At ang ganda ng tula...ang husay!

uno said...[Reply]

is something wrong? may problema ka ba sa love?

or you realy inlove?

mommy-razz said...[Reply]

love is in the air.. lablayf yahoooo!

iya_khin said...[Reply]

@kamila hahaha! may tuleleng kasi ang may akda!haha

@musingan hahaha! sige videoke king!!!sasabayan kita! hahaha!

@akoni roger-roger malakas ang hangin dito! over

@xprosiac hahaha! advance yan baka makalimutan ko pa!

@sey hahaha!! emo mode lang kailangan dyan...umengles lang sandali! hahaha

@lhuloy hahaha! sige kanta trip tayong tatlo!!!

@uno halata ba? hmmm?! hahahaha! something wrong talaga and fishy! umaalingasaw!hahaha

@mommy razz yeah!!! by the way yung request mo about sa avatar, granted! igagawa kita!!

Yanah said...[Reply]

super like.. kase super relate.
waaaaaaaaaaa
ang complicated talaga ng love na yan.
kainis.
sino ba kase pauso nyan.
lol

habang binabasa ko yang tula mo, may katabi akong trash can. dun nashoo-shoot ung mga tisyu na gamit ko sa pagpunas ng duguan kong ilong hahahahahaha :P

mommy-razz said...[Reply]

yes! im so excited, ano kaya ang hitsura ng avatar ko? hahaha! tnx in advance iya..

iya_khin said...[Reply]

@yanah ako din eh dinugo! hahahah! complicated din kasi pag iisip ng nagsulat! walang magawa! hahaha

@mommy razz relak lang po ako bahala sayo!

♥superjaid♥ said...[Reply]

husay naman oh..pomopoetry!=) ipagpatuloy mo yan sis..may patutunguhan ka hehehe =)

may pinaghuhugutan ba to?hihihi

iya_khin said...[Reply]

@superjaid natatawa talaga ako! pinaghuhugutan?! baka pinugutan! hahaha

Leonrap said...[Reply]

valentines?... hehehehe....
nag nanana ang ilong ko dito! di kinaya ang dugo! ahahaha

iya_khin said...[Reply]

@superjaid patutunguhan?! di ako sure! pinaghuhugutan.....binubunot meron! hhaha

Arvin U. de la Peña said...[Reply]

maganda ang sinulat mong ito..

iya_khin said...[Reply]

@leonrap eeewwwwww!!!! pasaksak kana ng antidote baka kung anong nana na yan!

@Arvin salamat naman po! seryoso?

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